Refining Chinese Sentences

I can propose a polished version of the Chinese sentence with better flow. Since there’s no instruction to edit, I could provide a few options for the user. I'll clarify what they want to do with the sentence and offer options like refining, rewriting, or translating it. Additionally, I’ll include one polished version with an English translation for immediate value, keeping everything concise and without heavy formatting. Let's keep it short and simple!